Monday, October 17, 2011

simple starts make blooming hearts



a green spread
air misty
a mother and young child stand
under a very tall tree.
the tree supports the sky,
bursting crimson
Life roots under a wide
field.
it feels eternal
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2 comments:

  1. Jana KNovember 5, 2011 at 9:44 AM

    I like the words you used for this little poem! Very creative and full of emotion :) My favorite line is, "The tree supports the sky, bursting crimson." Did I mention "Crimson" is one of my favorite words? Haha. I have way too many favorite words.

    Great job!

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  2. Abigayel-BryceNovember 8, 2011 at 2:35 PM

    Favorite words are the best! Thanks so much, I enjoy your poetry as well!

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